All Comments on 'Debutante MILF Lesbian Submissive'

Silk wove a wicked tale of deception bringing the right conclusion in the end.

What a way to start the new year. Will be reading this more than once. Loved the seductions and submissions; just need a little more sex to make it even better. Keep up the wonderful writings.

Wow...I cant believe how you drew me in with one plot and then satisfied me with another...I'm going to go re-read it and see if you foreshadowed any of this

Right up to the very end and then the bombshell. Would love to see you continue this story and have Miranda and her mother take charge of all the other women of the "club" or "harem". Love your work!!!

its just as grate as the rest of your stories if note better, you must in whith the best on hear as a writer .. your stories all ways make me hot and mostly wet thure thene keep thene cumming yours leann MAWH XXXXXX

Very interesting twist. I'd like to see a continuation of the story where we follow Serena's downward spiral into enslavement. Though, I think it would have to be darker that your typical fare considering how mean she's been. I'm thinking she needs complete immersion into the realm, with professional training. And nipple rings.

as an 18 year old HS senior from a wealthy upper class family have to say that i absolutely loved this story. it is so accurate in so many ways. most people would never understand how our lives differ than a majority of people in society. you have given them some insight to how we live. as a bi female myself, i have been with older women (moms of my friends and also older men-fathers of boyfriends or business associates of my father and my grandfather). thank you for this story...as i am sure you spent a lot of time putting it together....and it seems as if you have done your research too.

this is the best story I have read on here loved every minute of it will cum back to it again please continue to update

I always enjoy your stories. Best writer on here!

Bravo!!!!!

Very, very bad.

What a fabulously delicious story. Very intoxicating and addictive. I too would love for it to continue but if it doesn't then I will surely enjoy it again as it is. Great job as always. Wonderful writer.

Loved this story although I thought the mother submitted a bit soon. However, as the story unfolded, you did an excellent job showing the mother for what she was and disclosing that the daughter was not meek, but dominate through little hints. Loved the ending, although it did appear that you were going to have the daughter submit. But, nope the final downfall of the bitch. Great Story, Great ending and I agree that your stories are excellent. Great talent.

wtf is that guy sayin 'bad very bad' dumb idiot, loved it as always a bit long don't you think should've cut it off into diff posts but still great story

Absolutely ridiculous. Didn't buy the blackmail premise - girls in school are all about appearance and any other women would have called her bluff and let her put the video/photos out there. Stopped reading after they went to Paris (on a side note, Milan is the fashion capital, or they could've just gone to LA).

Boring and clichéd.

Great story, but the mother's name was Mrs. Zimmerman, aha? Good job though.

Goodness! well I am THAT older woman and I am drawn to submission to much younger women & girls. I have no particular interest in women my own age or similar.

I would have enjoyed more mind games & a little more physical domination from the young girl to her sub elder's...or maybe to have discovered a sorority of young lesbians from various teen age groups that I had to service, though I guess there were elements to suggest such a group of youngsters were involved.

It was very stimulating, my knickers are soaked, so something definitely got to me.

Thank you for a pleasant afternoons reading.

slut-lena

The title gives it away...would have liked a title that was generic and letting the story unfold would have been better

Do folks these days fall for the blackmail thingy ?? Most of us closet bi's anyway

xx

great story as usual,good plot good ending wet as ever will read again and again, now have a head cock cant wait to use it on a younger cunt keep the stories cumming

love abby (50)

As usual I loved this story, you are an amazing writer of erotica and I follow all of your series. Keep up the great work and I look forward to your next story/series.

would love to read what happens next with Miranda, her mom, Serena, her mom and all the other girls in the story if they get together and have an orgy or if Miranda and her mom bring Beth into their fun

wow your writing is soo good

thank you for doing your thing

I trueley love your writing, i wish i could write like you!! i have a great true story but i just dont know how to write the filler to hook the readers. if you ever need a new story or series i can give you the plot.

Your writing style is amazing. i was the daughter in an incestous relationship with both my parents. i loved reading the story of incest from the side of the Dominant instead of the submissive. It really opened my eyes....thank you!

Another great story. All you can do to improve is to write more stories. Keep writing, please.

Great story. Nice twist at the end. Would love to see where Serena ends after all this, and where the road leads Mom and daughter, perhaps assembling their own group of pussy pleasers. Also, Serena's mom said she was her first. I would really like to see how she made her mom her first pussy licker, and how she came to have the hold over so many as she did. Good job. Look forward to more in this saga.

i knew she would end up with her daughter but never even imagined it would be like that.the whole story was wonderful and very hot.and i agree maybe another story of where miranda and her mom and maybe even what happens to serena to.but i really loved the story

Notice how anyone who doesn't like this story can only post as 'anonymous'. I really appreciate the writing and story, the whole lot is fantastic and as a new reader of your material basically working alphabetically through your catalogue I can also see how your writing (my opinion) has improved in the past few years. As for the content, I didn't actually like the twist at the end, in fact it leaves me inclined not to read it again, but having said that right through the entire plot reference is constantly made how the daughter is totally opposite to her Mother. Should have guessed this might happen,

I love this story. I see myself as a submissive. So I relate to the submissive more. But I love this story so much. I've read it so many times I lost count.

I really enjoyed this story. Read it all the way through.

Your writing and plot twists are very good.

Excellent story and well written, has to be one of the best.

Would love to see a follow up where serena is humiliated by all her former pets.

I absolutely loved the story. I think it was well written and especially loved the ending. What a great turn around and surprise. Keep writting.

Good story but I hated the ending. Her mother should have been punished for being a weak slut but I liked how Miranda turned tables on Serena. I just really hate Miranda's mother.

Great story. I loved every minute of it. the ending was a real turn around and I loved the way Miranda took control of that bitch. Hope you will have a follow-up.

Yours stories always seem to get a "rise" out of me!

Nice well written story, if a little cliched. A few typos but very readable. I'm afraid that the 'twist,' just didn't work for me though. I could see no reason why Serena would suddenly become submissive, especially to a girl she had spent her teenage years bullying, and who previously showed no signs of dominance whatsoever. And as for Petra; why, when she loved so much being dominated by the young woman, did she suddenly take a position of control? And besides, surely all of the blackmail material still existed?

A better ending for me would have been for Miranda and Serena to be secretly in league to enslave Petra, and the other milfs into a harem shared between the two girls. But that's just my opinion and I'm not the author.

Apart from the unconvincing end I thought it was very good, good enough to keep me aroused for the time I had the pleasure of reading.

Thanks.

I will have to say that this is one of the best stories that I have read thus far.BE51

Truly one your best stories!!! Took me for a ride that I did not want to stop reading. Ok the only thread I would have loved being extended was reversal of fortune. Serena was a real bitch that needed more than one slap by Miranda. A few more bitch slaps to awaken her would have been an eye opener for Sabrina and a whole more humiliation aka cruel tasks. Just desserts.

You truly are talented!! This was, as I mentioned in the title, an excellent work!! I was SO glad when Miranda turned the table on that devious bitch Serena. That's the only thing I wish for with this story, more retribution that takes Serena down!! LoL once again, thank you for sharing your talent with us ;)

Beautiful and hot! What I love the most in it is the task where she have to masturbate using her daughter's panties. That's very hot! The only thing I don't like in it is the shifting of attitudes and emotions by the characters which are too unreal. Overall, I love it just like your other stories. Thanks for this. Please make more.

Amazing story. Best so far, and i read storyes here from over 6 years

Good story but I hated the ending. Absolutely don’t work with me. It’s just can’t be the truth - this fucking twist with Selena.

Other chapters are more than awesome!

One of the best, the ideal ending for catching mommy was this lmao

Oh yeah, I thought early on that this was an ugly story as Serena bullied everyone necessary to suit her own means. (Pun intended).I decided to read on just to see Serena get hers and serve those she treated the worst. So in the end I was not disappointed. I have had a couple of female friends that served mean masters. I won't use an uppercase m referring to those bastards. I haven't talked to either about their current relationship status in years.

I am glad you featured Megan in at least two stories. With her Discipline and Compassion for her pets to me she exemplifies what a true Mistress is. I've never been drawn into D/s but I have known Dominents, submissives and SwitcheS. (I didn't know if the word SwitcH uses upper or lower case so I used my own version. Uppercase on the beginning and ending of the word).

When I began reading on Lit I wasn't interested in D/s stories. I've since read and enjoyed many. I am a straight, white man in my 70's. I will continue working my way through your stories. I'm not much into hetero or gay male stories and I particularly enjoy Lesbian Romances. I would definitely like to see more of Jenny and Ashley with appearances by Megan and others. Thank you for all the great stories. I find them inspirational. ( I've often . . referred to the porn films I like as inspirational. It's an 'if you know what I mean situation'. It carries on after reading or watching. You often inspire me Ms Silk.

i came so many times reading this..especially the first few chapters...well done

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So very hot. Did not see the final activity coming but truly enjoyed it

225. Rather unbelievable this twisted ending, but desirable as I dislike bullying and prefer more loving encounters. Your situational presentation is amazing with so much detail with little repetition between stories. Hard to believe Serena would cave so fast to a girl so meek and mild as Miranda or who she was portrayed as. I liked the dual satisfication ending as mom and daughter began a new existence.

I was wrong about you, your stories are hot like this one, the ending I never saw coming