All Comments on 'December'

I really like it

Once again, posted in the wrong category. Lickety split's stories belong in the lesbian category.

I don't have any problem with the stories. Just post them so others will know what they are and not fuck with reading them if they don't pop your cork

Now lets be fair and grant a mulligan to the new one.

Twas well written - aserbic - unexpected - interesting - good flow and word choices - just not well placed as previously commented upon.

So, we look for more new author as you have promise - as good or better than this - but choose well your theme as carefully as it's spot. The theme because marital excites senses pro and con especially if it's unbalanced non-sharing or cheating without consequence. The location because you create expectations and will want understanding eyes and minds for appreciation sake.

Know your audience is a mixture of largely simi-normal folks here for entertainment and arousal - many married or been there and some back again but all with memories or lines in the sand. The unbalanced lesser balance are hard core or fantasy wannabies who have little or no sense of normalness or lifes realities but as is thier choice live in or frequent the arenas not acknowledged by most of humanity.

Your choice is simple. Who do you wish to serve and be respected by or desired by? Your Cherse - with concern and Regard

But a little bit short, no?

Whore’s coven.

Not a bad story at all. Wrong category but not the end of the world. Ignore the nasty loonies.