All Comments on 'Decent: Grace's Covert Humiliation'

Fantastic story

Spit and piss? It is amazing how authors can fu@k up their own stories.

Would love a scene with Kyle's dad and his mates suddenly being in same place as Grace with them all sniggering and cracking jokes behind her back

Great job. I hope you give this sequels.

This is a nicely constructed story.

It was a 5 until the piss and spit. Still have you a 4 though.

Good

you went from a 5 to a 1 piss and spit REALLY ?

Interesting story and perspective

The beginning was strong (although filled with too much obvious tropes) Sam's perspective was interesting and the highlight, but Grace's character was a bit too generic/cookie cutter on her stance. Then Kyle's dad part was just so left-field and rushed, felt like a page from another story thrown in.

Hope to read something similiar in the future!

Thanks for the feedback. I hear you. I'll have a go at modifying the part of the story that some (I assume many) found unenjoyable.

@Anniversay thanks for the comments and your thoughts.

I enjoyed most of your story very much. I agree with the comments that the piss and spit were turn-offs. Kyle's dad suddenly appearing without previous introduction didn't give us a chance to hate him, or want him to take the wife. But it's a good start, and I hope you'll write more.

Thanks for the comments @WifeWatchman. Chapter 2 arriving soon. I submitted a revised and edited version of Chapter 1 a couple weeks ago in response to the comments but it hasn't been subbed in yet.

Hope to read the revision soon!

Appreciate the effort!

Cheers! :)

I didn't mind the original. It was set up to knock her down, and I thought it was playing into the dad's expected attitude quite well.

Wow, that story pushed all my buttons, thanks

Amazing, highly erotic. I loved it, and the twist at the end added a little extra zest. Can't wait to read the next entries.

I'm glad if you enjoyed this set and appreciate you commenting. Chapter 4 is a logical stopping point. However, I'll likely put together an epilogue for this series. I plan to work on a new story line next.

As always, happy to hear suggestions for improvement from those of you who are more experienced writers than me, either here or in private.

Also always happy to entertain interesting ideas for incorporation into stories from anyone.

Decent vs descent.