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AnonymousAnonymousover 4 years ago
Great premise

But, obviously, there is a lot more you can do with their "relationship"

Litfan2016Litfan2016over 4 years ago
Very nice

well written short little story!

AnonymousAnonymousover 4 years ago
Part 2?

Amazing story. Hope there are more parts in which you develop their relationship

All_These_RoadworksAll_These_Roadworksabout 1 year agoAuthor

This is a one-and-done, there will be no sequel, but you can find heaps more stories on my website. (Link in bio.)

MasterJohn6969MasterJohn6969about 1 year ago

This has a good story line started, I'd like to see where you take it. You've got 3 or 4 more chapters in this. Keep up the good work.

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I create BDSM, degradation, humiliation and non-consent erotica. It's a fantasy, not an instruction manual - I strongly support positive enthusiastic consent, respect for boundaries and gender equity as the only acceptable basis for real-life interactions. After a short retu...