All Comments on 'Deep Strokes'

by RandyPanTheGoatBoy

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blaster666blaster6668 months ago

What an exceptionally written story. So beautifully told. 5 stars all the way!

RandyPanTheGoatBoyRandyPanTheGoatBoy8 months agoAuthor

@blaster666: thank you for such high praise, I see that you are a very popular author here and look forward to reading your works.

AnonymousAnonymous8 months ago

Loved this story but it was to short still gave it 5 stars !!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!

RandyPanTheGoatBoyRandyPanTheGoatBoy8 months agoAuthor

@Anonymous: that's awesome, I'm glad you loved it. I'd like to write longer stories. Hopefully I can build up to it in the near future.

OI8U2OI8U28 months ago

Great writing for only your third story. I like how desire quickly turned into fucking with no regrets.

RandyPanTheGoatBoyRandyPanTheGoatBoy8 months agoAuthor

@OI8U2 thank you so much, it's been a lot of fun so far exploring erotica in a literary sense.

Sex_CrazedSex_Crazed8 months ago

Is something going to happen with Tracy?

RandyPanTheGoatBoyRandyPanTheGoatBoy8 months agoAuthor

@Sex_Crazed: In all honesty I had this pegged as a one-off, but let's leave it to ferment and maybe I'll at least revisit a character or two moving forward. I'm all for shared universes.

AnonymousAnonymous8 months ago

Very nice thank you can you extend it by another two or chapters

AnonymousAnonymous8 months ago

Loved this story but the start was a little off for me !! You need to continue with more chapter to see where this goes gave it 5 stars

RandyPanTheGoatBoyRandyPanTheGoatBoy8 months agoAuthor

Thank you, may I ask what was off about the start of the story?

AnonymousAnonymous6 months ago

Very nice story you need to continue and have his daughter find out about them and then join them! 5 stars

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English, broad-minded, creative, articulate, conscientious, well enough read, and with a taste for the dark, deep, and profound. And sometimes the silly, the ironic, and the downright bizarre. Feel welcome to mail feedback for my stories, to discuss how the fantasy element wo...