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Ending seemed rushed but good one

As a "technical writer and contract writer " you should appreciate the value of proof-reading your effort before submission. This piece is full of simple errors of various sorts.

By the way, the correct term for a male massage provider is masseur. Masseuse, like waitress and actress, is the female variation.

A masseuse is a woman! A man who gives massages is a masseur.