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Rob_RoyaleRob_Royaleover 1 year ago

Well, I gotta say, that was pretty damned brilliantly done. I'm beyond impressed. First-person writing is supposed to be a narrative, journal-esque, and it is and then again, it's not. To read something that actually was a journal entry was very fresh and it made her completely relatable because it's a deep dive into the MC's mind, with all its strengths and weaknesses. Really, really, good stuff.

OmenainenOmenainenover 1 year ago

I read this again, and I still loved it. Too bad I can’t vote again! Thank you so much for posting this to my event!

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'Juan Seisz FitzHall' is (big surprise) a pseudonym, under which I have published three erotic novels at smashwords.com: 'Mega Platinum VIP,' 'The Dance Game,' and 'Erotopia,' which together make up the trilogy 'The Erotichronicles.' That trilogy is finished. If the characters...