All Comments on 'Defeated Jock Ch. 01'

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AnonymousAnonymousabout 5 years ago
Kinda uncomfortable.

Um... I’ve read a couple of humiliation jock stuff on here before but this felt a bit forced. It’s a bit much and I hoped for more context to why he was so compelled to take on these bets other than he’s an asshole.

AnonymousAnonymousabout 5 years ago
Worse than I hate my master

Max has the ability to make stories like Dominating a Neighbor and chooses to make stories like this.

AnonymousAnonymousabout 5 years ago
very hot

dam I wish I was taylor

AnonymousAnonymousabout 5 years ago
Interesting

I didn’t see that coming. I thought that there would be nothing smutty in this whole story. Boy was I wrong

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