All Comments on 'Defiled: Liriel'

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Crusader235Crusader235over 2 years ago

Very good story. 5 stars worth.

Hope there's more, maybe a theesome with sisters? Maybe some payback to them treacherous Elves for cheating all those years, sneaky magical creatures they are. Hope you keep going.

competitivespringcompetitivespringover 2 years ago

Oh my god, this story is so good! I would trade places with Liriel in a heartbeat! I absolutely love the premise and worldbuilding! Her sister's betrayal also made the stakes even more interesting, and I would love to see a part 2 - I think this is the first time I've read one of your stories (I'm very new to the site, and still discovering so many incredible storytellers). The characters felt so real! I hope we get to see more of this amazing world! 5/5

abiostudent3abiostudent3over 2 years ago

Well. It was nice until it got so rapey. Guess I should have expected that from the title.

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