All Comments on 'Deidre Ch. 01'

Wonderful male fantasy - two deflorations in two pages

The characters seem real - ditzy, maybe too ditzy - but still, the author has the ability to write dialog that sounds like real people talking. Not too much of that around here

I'm not actually reading this story; I'm just posting to say that my mother's name is also Deidre (spelt that way, too! Ha what're the odds?!) xD I would read it....but....as you can imagine, it'd feel awkward...xD

Anyways, judging by the length of the story, you seemed to put a lot of time and effort into it and I just wanna give you a pat on the back for that! I wish you well and keep up the good work! 😊