All Comments on 'Deleah Goes Fishing'

Needs more depth of characters and plot to rise from Erotic Coupling to Romance.

The story does present the love of a young woman for an older male and certainly presents more than just an affair.

Sorry,

My first attempt at this category. Look for my second entry in this category coming soon.

It will have more depth

very nice story. a bit longer to fill out the characters would have helped, perhaps, but not needed. much more romantic than usually seen here, which is a good thing, sometimes.

This is a beautiful lovely story

Silly but sexy.

Needs filled out, as is it comes across as a little creepy but it has great potential