All Comments on 'Delectable Syn'

You need at least a second, if not a third an fourth, part to this pronto! Definitely need a chapter with Ty and Jen finally having sex and all three moving into an apartment together. Loved the story and waiting for more to come.

Outstanding, very well paced. The only thing that you make this better is a single.

You tell a VERY good story.

One of the best. Not complicated, simple and straight forward. It could go on but doesn't need to. What would follow would not add to the sensuous tale and just might lower the beauty implied in the story line.

This is a great start and I gave it a 5. However, there are a few grammatical errors. The most frequent seems to be you completely leave out a word. I look forward to a second chapter.

Loved this so much! I really hope the next chapter has a heavy focus on Ty and Jen. Kind of showing how things go with each of her new lovers. I will say the one thing I didn’t like was the lack of Ty taking Jen’s V-card. Unless that is a big part in a sequel. Then this is amazing set up for that. It’s also be great to see Ty take charge of his ladies more.

I don't know how I didn't see this the day it was posted but this story was absolutely incredible. I hope we get to read much more about these characters, and much more from this author in general.

Good job on this ! One other thing, editor!

Thanks for sharing.

This was so hot and so well written!