All Comments on 'Delia's Dilemma'

You should follow up

Please get an editor, several mistakes.

nice to see what happens when a female guard comes in on one of their next sessions!

then, the swim team needs a little motivation! they win...Delia's the prize!

Id like to read more needs to be a part 2 for sure

i luv it just make it longer or maybe write a couple of more chapters

In concept, it's not a bad piece of fiction. Except for the small detail that working part-time at a swimming pool couldn't possibly be worth that level of degradation.