All Comments on 'Delilah's Hopes & Dreams for Samson'

You write extremely well. Your stories have grown longer, and it could be said that they have grown rather long in their intracies of intimacies, but... One thing is for sure. You write EXTREMELY well.

You write extremely well. Your stories have grown longer, and it could be said that they have grown rather long in their intracies of intimacies, but... One thing is for sure. You write EXTREMELY well.

Nothing more than that. Stick to Gay and Fetish stories.

One of the best build-up I ever read ! I wish I could convince my girlfriend to do the same to me !

break it into chapters to make it easier to read

While this story is quite long, and I usually prefer shorter to the point stories, the sheer heat and intensity of the tease was done to perfection. I've never read an erotic story that captured both the love and the lust side of sex so well, that made it so much more exciting in my opinion. GREAT JOB!!!

<b>To the commenters </b>- Anyone who thinks this story is "gay" is wholly unenlightened; this is about sex between a husband and wife. There are not 2 men in the story. If there aren't 2 men (or 2 women) acting then there's simply nothing gay about it.<br><br>

<b>To the author </b>- another fantastic story. Well-written, punctuated and blazingly hot from the start to the finish. It was well worth the time spent reading it, and I hope you continue your stories that you've been doing along these lines, as they are utterly inspirational.

But a man that takes anything real or not up the shithole is GAY. That is how GAY men get their kicks. So a woman fucking a man up the shithole with a dildo and the man accepts it and is willing to do it again that makes HIM GAY or at least BI. And men getting fucked up the shithole is also a FETISH. plus you have the domination of the husband. Again FETISH.

You don't seem to take much interest in the act itself, but in getting there. I can't fault you that, though after such a long tease I would have liked something more than instant orgasms.

A very enjoyable tale, the teasing is almost maddening.

Another dynamite piece of work. One of the best ever on Lit.

It's funny how some people have to mock the sorts of things that excite other people. It reveals an ignorant bigotry that's really not appropriate for Literotica. If you're here reading stories, it stands to reason that what gets you off might *not* get someone else off; but that's a matter of taste and not a reason to go attacking people's work ad hominem. Feel free to proceed to the next story if one doesn't suit your tastes.<br><br>

This story is a terrific piece of writing that builds up the tension incredibly to the act itself, which is committed by a hetero couple. Anything consensual a man & woman do together cannot -- by definition of the term itself -- be "gay." <br><br>

Based on some of the comments below, it appears that the commenter believes some acts between a man & woman might be considered "gay", based on the definition of the term as "how gay men get their kicks." <br><br>

That's a pretty wide definition. By that rationale, a lot of other acts... such as<b> kissing of any sort, oral sex, even just one person touching another could be considered "gay" because gay men (and women) do those sorts of things too.</b> If those sorts of acts between consenting adults offend you, this may not be the site for you. Nearly every story posted here has at least one of those.<br>

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Thanks, Escriterra, for another fantastic piece. Please keep up the excellent work and disregard the naysayers.

I'm just wondering, um exactly how much of the 10 page story did you guys actually read? Either you didn't read the whole story and are therefore not in any position to judge the story, or you did read ALL 10 pages of it, in which case....hmmm?

To the author: WOW, you know how to write some hot stories. I'm very impressed by your talent, please write more...

escriterra continues to write the hottest stories of this type on Literotica. A wonderful slow burn.

Damn... you hit ALL the buttons, every time. The long, slow build-up to the party, her careful and complete manipulation of him, always using his public embarrassment to feed his arousal, and "climax," so to speak... outstanding!

I already liked your work but this has given me a new appreciation for your talents. Keep 'em coming! (Literally and figuratively.)

By a "writer" whom likes to listen to himself !!!

AWESOME! What a great story love the way you teased us all the way through it.

You write very well; you know that already I'm sure. If you wanted to get my sexual juices going as a woman reader, I'd offer this suggestion--more focus on a husband whose wife is enough for him would feel really, really good, & less bringing other women into things. That's what I want. I hate stupid Brandy, with her stupid hard nipples. I pictured her as this sugary sweet college co-ed with long blond hair, and I found myself wanting to just yank her up by that hair, spin her around, & sling her just about as far away from MY man as I could get her. I know women are supposed to pretend we don't get jealous like that, but I do, and I'm a shitty liar, that's just the way it is. And yes, I know men have fantasies about other women, even when they love you, and being with somebody doesn't mean I'll never find another man attractive again--we're all human--but the thought of my husband's dick getting stiff because another woman thinks he's cute and she's watching us...that would make me feel more fear and anger than pleasure, especially if she's a college co-ed sorority girl, pre-pharmacy type everybody else thinks is so sweet, while I'm this bitchy, angry writer who thinks too much. I guess maybe all men are like that, wanting more than one woman, but I still wish they weren't, &, bottom line, I'm not a man--I'm a woman; my *real* authentic desires (when I'm not trying to twist them into something I think men would rather they be) aren't necessarily going to fit with what men think they should be. This is gonna sound dorky, but do you know what would feel really romantic to me? Having a near-sighted husband who actually took his glasses off when there were other women around, just because he didn't even want to *go there* as far as looking at them was concerned, or being tempted. Call me selfish, but I want to be a GODDESS in my husband's eyes, and when it comes to me at least, your Goddess is a jealous, vengeful goddess, and you shall have no other goddess but me!;-) Maybe that's because, if I'm thinking about another man sexually, the guy I'm with really *should* be worried--it means I'm kind of wanting to leave him; jealousy gets a bad rap nowadays, but I think it's actually kind of sweet; it means the person cares enough for you that you have the power to hurt them. My sensuality and my sexuality grow stronger when I focus them mostly on just one guy, and few things make a woman feel more powerful than feeling like she's all the woman her fella really needs, even as the years go by, at least that's true for most women I think, if we were really honest with men about what we want.

Side note, you wrote: "It [a guy being entered by a woman, and then fucked deep, and lovingly] was so intoxicatingly DIFFERENT from, 'Come here, baby, and put it inside me'---the sexual coupling mindset dictated by female physiology."--and I want to put this question to you--is that mindset really, truly dictated by female physiology, or by the way women learn to *perceive* our physiology? If I grow up being told my vagina is just this passive hole, then, yeah, I'll believe the whole "he does intercourse to passive little-ole-me" view is the ONLY way to think of what's going on during intercourse. There are other ways to think about it though, for those who are interested in questioning things (most people just follow like sheep, but still, there are a few rare, non-conformists, argumentative men out there...) Doesn't he *actually* lose his penis in her body during intercourse; he's exposed and she sees all of him when he's excited, as you point out, he can't hide it--ie, she "knows" him in a way he'll never be able to know her because her genitals are internal mostly (I actually think the "G-spot" is just part of the clitoris, which, most folks don't know, is actually a very long organ; a clitoris extends far into the front part of a woman's vaginal wall, and is longer than most penises)--a penis is always vulnerable, no matter how "hard" it is--all you have to do is bite down on it with all your might and you can draw blood, or bend it backwards and suddenly that dude is no longer active or in control--he's in pain! A penis can be thought of as delicate, and pretty, & I think the whole "come here baby, stick it in me" mindset is actually dictated by male -supremist ideology (that's this crap about men are strong, women weak, men are active, women passive--gender role crap basically) rather than something innate about women's bodies--If I was gonna have traditional intercourse with a guy, I'd have him say, "Oh please, please baby, swallow me up with your vulva, engulf me, smother me, possess me, please, make me belong to you!"--but we don't say that stuff because men are running the show in the world we live in and they want to feel strong and in control, (even though, some of them will admit that gets exhausting too) & because women are supposed to be submissive sexual masochists.

Anyway, the people who call you gay are just dip-shits, I hope you know that. You're a brave boy for being willing to question and rethink this stuff around sex, and I think the strap-on love scenes you write are fun, and hot, and beautifully sexy (not dirty, just SEXY and passionate AS HELL;-); they drift back into my mind throughout the day and make me smile; when you write about the way your male characters actually WANT to feel a woman moving inside them, deep and slow, lovingly stroking in and out in order to open them up, open their snug, warm little assholes up to these wonderful sensations and trembling moments of climax, you have no idea how erotic that is for women like me (assuming there are any more of us out there--most women I know, even feminist friends, think I'm weird for wanting to try this out someday). But I digress--truth is, your stories are taking up far too much of my time, and I must go do something productive now!;-)

"His naked asshole now vulnerable and completely exposed to her, Kiana's mind briefly leapt to one of the passages she'd read in recent weeks on a blog: 'Seeing him like that, open to me, surrendering everything and knowing that he's giving me complete control of his body is undoubtedly the sexiest pose my man can strike.'

'I like it when you show it to me,' she whispered, reaching underneath to close her slick fist around his cock. 'You look so sexy like this. I think it's because you're opening up the part of you that you never show anyone, that is mine alone to see, that is a very, very private entrance just for our pleasure.'

She leaned her face near to him, drawing in his musky, arousing scent. Extending her tongue, she tickled the tip across his entrance, soft as butterfly wings against a flower petal. A low moan escaped from his throat."

This passage feels very erotic to me as a woman reader; I like the type of verbal teasing your female character does to her husband here, and I also admire the softness of the final image; there's a lot of tenderness here that, for me at least, feels like you at your best; particularly the emphasis on how private the act is between them does something to me.

"1*" !!

Just wish it didn't end so abruptly, I realize it's all about the lead up, but that was still a bit too fast :(

Otherwise fantastic!!

Fantastic story!!!

I like all the different scenarios! What great fun!

A kind, caring and loving wife is greatly appreciated. Most guys would enjoy doing these things if no real humiliation was involved.

More please!

I really enjoyed this story! I felt teased and tortured just as Troy/Sampson did throughout the story. Every move Delilah made made me writhe in pleasure and hungry for my own ass fucking from my wife. Author did a great job from every aspect and i look forward to reading the rest of the stories. I really enjoyed that this story didnt contain any humiliation or masochism. Great job!

A joy to read.

Excellent hot story, very well writen. Clap clap clap clap. Thanks

Strap on? That’s pretty queer for LW.