All Comments on 'Deliverance'

has been mentioned in today's New Story Review Thread in the Author's Hangout.

The use of Fuhrer is not in good taste. Also the story sems a bit disjointed and abrupt. What was all that about stayingafter camp? It was never resolved or discussed. The way they acted and talked, it did not make much sense that they were virgins,

Too many details, and most were never resolved. Most of the details he went into had nothing to do with the story. You are not getting paid by the word.6cd