All Comments on 'Deloris'

Cute. Short, implausible, but still a delight to read. Manual dexterity is underrated.

Interesting, I described your “Gwen” story as cute and I see that someone else used the same word here. I think that you do have a cute style, gentle but also sexy, arousing little fantasies.

Clever premise.

But seriously rushed.

Too automatic.

Seemed like author had a list of things that would/could be included and then thicked them off one by one.

Four stars. Being generous.