All Comments on 'DeLuca's Pleasure Pt. 02'

Been there and celiabated that with the post-partum thing. Its no fun for all concerned, needless to say. Things happen very fast in this story with dream like aura. I wish, in terms of technical story-telling, this was more character-driven and more effort was made with dialogue. But in terms of raw heat given off, NO complaints and for this site , that's the main thingy.

Easy and entertaining read for sure, maybe next time the writer will challenge himself just a bit more. Just because.

Add this one to the well written story list! Smooth delivery of straight forward characters. The sex is both exciting as well as fun. Thanks for sharing your writing talent with us.

I've read all your stories, and I love them all!

Writing has stayed good but um well, don't want to yuck anyone else's yum but ick. Still no one I could cheer for, but for an amoral lot they may prove interesting if explored, so ill read on I guess.