All Comments on 'Demon Child Ch. 03'

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AnonymousAnonymousalmost 16 years ago
Superb Creation indeed!

And you are so great at creating stuff! Super indeed! Great~!

~KA~

Mistress_DeziMistress_Dezialmost 16 years ago
Loved It

I love this story please do not stop this story... it's definitely one of my faviortes

DragonDreamerDragonDreameralmost 16 years ago
Brava!

And thank you! You've got another good one here. I'll be eagerly awaiting the next chapter. I appreciate your sharing your gift with us.

Zodia195Zodia195almost 16 years ago
Nicely done

You can tell that these people are honorable despite their warlike nature. I love the contrasts. Can't wait to see what happens next and to see when they discover she's a demon herself. Great job overall. I love the language thing.

AnonymousAnonymousalmost 16 years ago
I WANT MORE

I want more it keep you hanging for more .Please continue the series is verrrryyyyy good.Don't stop in chapter 3 i want to know what happen to her.Keep writing

mchuchamchuchaabout 14 years ago

I'm enjoying myself so far. Now moving on to Ch. 04.

AnonymousAnonymousabout 12 years ago
Dry opinion

I don't like reading from the point of the victim. Also the life of a slave brings no excitement. I'll try two more chapters to find something inspiring.

AnonymousAnonymousover 11 years ago
Good Work

to lazy to sign in to m account just for feedback, but i love it, i appreciate that the story is not entirely sex, yet at the same time it is, if that makes sense. the sex scenes are very good and i look forward to reading more

AnonymousAnonymousabout 9 years ago
consistent...

above average quality - well done - thanks for your time and talent.

star_cursedstar_cursedover 8 years ago
just getting started

I have read the last few chapters and rated them but this is the frist comment I have left. So far I am enjoying this, I love that the story is not to wordy, it doesn't stay in one place for too long; Neither does it rush to the sex. Interested to see where the plot goes and of course how the main Characters pair up ;-)

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