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AnonymousAnonymousover 8 years ago

Nice story

AnonymousAnonymousover 8 years ago
Good story.......

It was a good story, however there were a few editing flaws. I wasn't able to give it a full 5 stars for that. I did enjoy reading it. It was a good plot and I wish it could have been longer. Please continue to write, there is a lot of potential there in your writing.

AnonymousAnonymousover 8 years ago

Really needs editing, would have been nice if it was longer also

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I'm 48 and the mother of two grown kids. I have four grandsons that are my world. I'm single and live in a small town. My roommate Peaches, and I write together. We had a book published in 2016, titled Torn. We are currently working on more books for publication. We can be fou...