All Comments on 'Demon Queened Ch. 05'

This is just getting better!

Looking forward to more, really loving it so far

A slow build up is cool, but not much action so far. Also I came here for the harem tag, and I'm not seeing that come together, at least not for a while.

Your prose is very, very good though, and the story so far is fun and surprising. Keep it up!

All I will say is that if this was a book on KU I would happily read it, as this is better than a lot of the works I have been reading on there. Anyway, thank you for your effort!

I'm upset at how invested i am in this story. The premise, characters, world, it's so interesting. I actually exclaimed, "What! Where's the rest?!" when i saw you ended on that cliffhanger. So. You've got that going for you.

Please drop the next chapter soon lmao.

Ironic.