by princess_kay
I’ve been waiting on pins and needles for this an it was worth it! More please!
more!! great job. I wasn't sure at the start of this story, as it isn't my usual cup of tea, but now I am just waiting for the next one.
I really enjoyed the story so far.
You really hit a sweet spot between being descriptive enough that I can really emerse myself in your world without loosing yourself in to much detail. The interactions between the characters are really sweet and I find myself smiling ever so often.
Normally Iam not a big fan of the ego perspective of telling a story but somehow you make it work perfectly.
Demon queened is now on the top list of my literotica stories together with three square meals and home for horny monsters and I hope we will see you reach chapter 100 sometimes...at least
Can I just say that Lucy is completely, totally, utterly freaking ADORABLE? She could probably crush an ordinary human's skull with a touch if she wanted and yet she's also so innocent and pure that even when she's practically begging "Eena" for sex there's not a trace of selfishness or deception anywhere. She even manages to turn her motivation from simply obvious horniness into an act of kindness!
It's incredibly wholesome.