All Comments on 'Demon Queened Ch. 23'

What hell!!! Gotten way to short now. If you plan on doing this post the next 2 chapters closer. Sucks leaving us hanging. Then wait or never get updated n have to reread to understand forgotten story.

As much as I'd love to have longer chapters - or more frequent ones, for that matter - this is what I can currently manage. Part of it is simply the long break I'm coming back from, and the fact that it's taking a bit to shake off the rust - I do expect them to get longer as I get back into the swing of things, and I'm working to make that happen.

I'd post more frequently if I could, but depression makes it tricky to keep to a weekly schedule as is.

More little pieces in place. Should be more interesting conversations ahead. Looking forward to more.

I've been a long time fan of this series - I remember seeing chapter one in the new stories page and it's crazy to think that was 3 years ago! I love how far this story has come, and I love what you have been doing with these characters. Thank you so much for continuing this story, and I hope your health has gotten better with your break. I'm excited to see what comes next :)

Don’t worry about the short chapters, honestly! It’s a bit like being toyed with in bursts, the tease is hot and the wait is hot too 🥰

Loving the whole thing.