All Comments on 'Demon Rain'

Heather,

You know I'm a huge fan of this piece. I just think it's wonderful that this got accepted. Thanks again for the sneak peak.

Love,

Jessica

That was fucking fabulous! Bravo!

stormie

It's a great story, don't get me wrong. But the flow is a little choppy. I had to force myself to read all of it. Though, I absolutely hate pov stories to begin with. Thank you for your submission, and I hope you do well in the future.

love this story!

thank you

omg im masturbating now

"When I realized we were moving I tried to protest but it was no use…fighting him was like trying to fight the wind, no matter how much you try it will still touch you."

Artful genius.