by A_Gavin_MaCross29
This story and this series are fantastic, really hot and well-written. I'm enjoying them a lot. One thought, that you are welcome to ignore, is that you place a lot of emphasis on Rana being submissive, and yet the way plays out, it more comes off that she's just agreeable. She seems to be doing the things that she wants to do and getting what she wants (regarding her relationship with Lucas). I know that you're trying to differentiate between the way that Lucas treats Rana and the way he treats his mother, but I think there's still a lot of room to explore how the effects of the demonic influence have turned Rana into somebody who gets off on submitting, on doing things she doesn't want to do, on pleasure being withheld, and on being degraded. Anyway, I'm excited to keep reading this story regardless. Keep up the good work!