All Comments on 'Demon's Alter-Ego Ch. 21-23'

Five stars, in my opinion.

This story definitely exceeds the boundaries of Literotica. Sometimes it's quite philosophical, psychological, metaphorical, demanding. Especially this very chapter.

I daresay, too much literature for some (TML).

Nevertheless, I enjoy your story very much.

I really appreciate the comment.

I do realize that my story is a bit much and sometimes that makes me hesitate on continuing to put it out on a public forum. It is my hope that readers figure that out quickly and move on to a different author if it is not their cup of tea. Frequently, I think I should put it in Novels and Novellas. If I remember correctly, it started in Non-Human before such a category existed and that is my own stubbornness with maintaining it there. Most likely I will do so with the next series. As long as readers are interested with what happens next I'll keep publishing for everyone's enjoyment.

On a side note, I do have sex in the next submission, no where near as amazing as some of the authors I read on this site though. There are a lot of re-writes during these parts of the storyline with hopes that I make it at least a little tantalizing.

Again, it's wonderful to know someone is enjoying reading this as much as I enjoy writing about these characters. Thank you

@akbunny:

What I really like about Literotica, it's free literature.

Here, people are allowed to write what they really think and feel.

Here you can write without thinking about what a publisher thinks of it or how much money can be made with story.

Certainly, I like sex, but it must plausible. I like a good story without sex much better than just porn with senseless fucking, that's not my cup of tea. A good writer is able to write about sex without describing a single scene. That's what makes a good writer, talent, skill and craftsmanship.

Your story intrigued me from the first chapter, Demon's Grace Ch. 01.

It's truly cathartic (at least for me). It's artful, elaborate (in a good way)

Your writing has definitely changed and improved, as far as it is recognizable for me as a non-native speaker.

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This story stands out.

To put it briefly: By all means, keep it up!

Wonderful storytelling; layered, compelling and strangely uplifting. Great job.

I devoured this story over the last few weeks, and I

Savored

Every

Bite.

What little can be said to do justice to your hours of toil, anguish and joy? Not much but I'll try.

Thank you, and looking forward to more. Never loose that spark, this is such a deceptively deep and nuanced story without being too big or overly complicated. You step through it, adding layer after layer, you never feel like you're being narrated too. You'll be another of my favorite authors here on Literotica.