All Comments on 'Demon's Blood Ch. 01'

i love a good twist

Definitely want to read more of that

on your first story to Lit. And a really good story I might add. So on a night he goes to find the truth about his mother, he gets alot more than that. He's attacked to a girl he is later to watch, he's attacked and oh yea about his mother wells she a demon surprise. Again nice first chapter. It left me wanting to know more about everything and that equates to wanting/waiting for chapter 2.

Again congrats on your first submission to Lit. I hope it is the first of many success you find in writing.

. . .but needs a lot more work in terms of the quality of writing.

I really like where this is heading and can't wait to read more.