All Comments on 'Demon's Grace Ch. 21-23'

I like your storyline....you need to bring in more depth to the 3 main characters. One way is to have Dove think about Taurin and Ezra, so we the readers know about them. You might want to add more detailed sex between Ezra and Dove or even Dove and Taurin.....maybe even have her remember back to when she first bonded with Ezra and what was going through her mind, etc. Other than that....really great story!! :)

youve made me an addict! i need more!