All Comments on 'Two Marines and a Soldier'

A very well thought out and written story. I definitely look forward to reading more of your work. As this is my first foray into your writing and the first story you posted here I have added you to my favorites list. I appreciate your and your Muse's imagination and abilities to bring it to your story. Thank you for sharing your vision and talents.

This was so freaking hot. Inconsistencies aside, I loved it. Did you three get together again? How did she react when you're u freed her??

Thank you for the story. I enjoyed it. However, I was confused by the names of the two Marines. Seems that one is Michael and the other is either Neil, Chris, or Tutor. The inconsistent usage made it a little hard for me to follow the story.

there would be a lot fewer frustrated people around. Also it would make dating easier.

Nice story, by the way.

More adventures with these three characters please

Well written and hot. Keep writing!

The story is superb - had to come back and read it again. And the girl is definitely a keeper!

Not bad at all! Pretty damn hot & well done. My only complaint would be that it jumped around in time so much, having only 3 lines per scene in some places made it a little jarring.

It was damn hot, very well done otherwise, and I would love to see this continued!

I stil gave you a 5 star rating for the good laugh!

RecHiker

I had to laugh as I read this story. Two badass Marines tie a female soldier to their bed so they can get to strip her and see her naked. hummmmmmmmmm! Chesty Puller would be proud of both Marines. LMFAO!!!

I still liked the story - BUT - It still only takes an ARMY of ONE!!