All Comments on 'Deployed, Tattooed, Transformed Ch. 03'

Just seems rushed and too easy to resolve some major issues. Blech

I am so please the author has this caring attitude. We must remember we are not built all the same. Sorry to say, I am a one and done person and feel the author is a total nutter.

Nice story - it looks like everything turned out for the best. The author probably deserves better though.

Not what a soldier would do.

Isn’t this the best outcome for all involved irl?

The ultimate cuck, the baby even named after him. Femdom agitprop— Jeez!

LOL, really? He shrugs off his wife's infidelity, _which happened while he was still there_, and then demands that they all raise her bastard child together... Interesting and terrible story.

I know this shit is rampant here but it still makes me cringe to point out that he made HIMSELF a literal cuckold by demanding to raise his wife's bastard child. Ugh

The story started off well but descended into one of utter drivel. No way would a mand bring up another mans child with his whore of a wife and a lying misguided daughter.

Wow! The major is a major cuck!

He is rhe VERY definition of a cuckold.

He is married. His wife gets pregnant by another man. He knows about it. And chooses to stay married to the lying whore. And then...happily and proudly raises the bastard as his own son?

Sorry you dumbasses who proclaim the MC isn't a cock? THAT is exactly what he is.

And this story is fucking nonsense.

No way a major in the army is accepting this deception and amount of lying from his wife.

He's divorcing her skanky stupid ass as soon as he possibly can.

Way to write a farcical fantasy. 1 star.

Ugh, was going well and then took a terrible turn. He too quickly forgives, forgets, and decides to raise the child of his wife's betrayal. She cheated on him while he was still in the states, she didn't have the excuse of being lonely because her husband was gone for so long. She also immediately conspired with her daughter to hide it, never even thinking of being honest to him about her cheating. I find it difficult to believe she cheated and didn't use a condom when she was obviously not on a contraceptive. How drunk did she get?

What ruined it was not the reconciliation. If he can't do better than a woman that mentally dysfunctional and emotionally driven to acts of ignorance, well, that's his choice. But it was WAY too preachy and sanctimonious. I suspect the upbringing of the faux Paul, Jr. will be rife with discord, embarrassment, probably drugs and or alcohol. Once the kids are grown and gone I also expect the marriage to finally implode. Jane is too stupid to keep herself from getting pregnant, for a pity fuck? No condom, no morning after pill? Apparently she was trying to get pregnant at this time in their lives, and the husband wasn't part of the decision and the process? And how does she explain not telling friends, family, and her husband, that she was pregnant, when she finally gives birth to her husband's baby. Guess Jane isn't the only person here who isn't thinking.

A good plot idea. A weak execution. But thanks for the effort.

A very good story about an honorable man, a gullible but loving wife who made a ton of mistakes due to her "affair", and a loving daughter. There was no cuck persona at all, just a deep hurt that he finally faced up to when his wife made the most difficult decision of facing him alone in a foreign country. A sorrowful circumstance with a pitiful wife, a well meaning daughter, and decisions made by a true man. Shame on all you creatures who called him a cuck!

3 - This is a sad loveless relationship and pure military crap.

There is no emotion, caring or feeling in this story.

It is like someone is reading a script.

Yes, the function of men in society is to be the support systems for sluts and their bastards./sarc/ REAL MEN hold women accountable and do not tolerate the behavior of women like the wife character in this story. Our "tough" military guy is just the usual cliche - a weak, needy, LW cuck husband character. And, for the idiots here, "forgiveness" does NOT imply reconciliation. The correct thing to do is to divorce the slut and let her keep her bastard. That way, Jane gets to enjoy the "new family" her slutting created, and Janice gets taught the right lesson - don't be a slut because adultery has devastating consequences.

I agree with Wargamer and others who rated this as a cuck story. Pretty disgusting. 1*

Great story. Ignore the cuck comments. Any honest person will admit that in the right circumstances Everyone is prone to temptation or making a huge error in judgment. That is far different from a conscious, deliberate decision to betray their spouse.

I rarely score stories but in this case I did, five stars.

Plus l’m happy to see you stopped writing here. Thank God!!!!

Scored this previously 2/5 and commented.

I stand by those comments. You turned a good story into Cuck drivel

Now scores 1/5

So, our rough, tough, General Milleyesque Major uses bluster to try to cover up accepting being a full fledged cuck. Great lesson for the daughter...you can fuck around and get away with it.

Absolutely gross RAAC...

Lovely story.

This was a nice read, quite enjoyable. Thank-you very much.

However....

How could Jane get back Paul Jr? Even if Maj. Paul is the father of record, Stan via a DNA test, can show he is the father of the child. Since Jane gave up the child, and presumably signed paperwork in doing this, (in chp.1 it was stated that Jane gave the baby up for adoption, so would there not be paperwork involved?), then there would be no legal footing to remove child from Stan.

Yes, Stan was depressed and suicidal, but he could have gotten over it and having a son could very well have turned him around. If, as Paul seems to believe, that Stan was faking it just to score with Jane or other women, (though their is no evidence of that in this story), that would not preclude him from being the child's father/guardian.

Just a thought

Still a good story

I love a good story and the way you turned the responsibility to whom it belonged. Thank you sir.

Raises another’s child happily..if this is what the men in the military are capable of.. no doubt their spouses fuck freely when they are deployed..

Cos the spouses and their lovers know that nothing is gonna happen to them.. and even if she gets preggo.. the cuck soldier will ‘man up’ and look after the child..

I wish he would have gotten revenge. As a veteran, I witnessed way too many wives cheating while their husbands were deployed, on TDY, or at sea. It does go both ways though. I saw a lot of guys getting hookers in various liberty ports. I always tell new personnel to wait until after the military to get married.

She still got off lightly IMHO.

Yours is one path an equally likely path is Jane kicked to the curb.

Your end ruined your story, chapters 1 & 2 got a score of 5 & 4 respectively, chapter 3 gets a 2 out 5 as does the overall story. Such is life.

"It wasn't the sex that was transformative. The sex was wonderful and it was so good to have Jane by myself"

before she runs off to fuck another man again you pathetic cuck, your daughter now knows that "real" men dont do shit when their wives cheat

As a veteran I do appreciate this good story

Stan needs to get what's coming to him.

While I liked the beginning of the story and felt that the MC's shock and hurt was well portrayed, I have a lot of issues with the way the author decided to conclude it. On the good side, I appreciated that Paul was mostly concerned about his daughter Janice and her state of mind. He knew he and his wife had caused her some major damage and he sought to correct it when he was made aware of it... Which he should have done on his own months before. Regardless of his temporary deadbeat Dad act, he wanted to make things right with Janice and he did what he was able to in order to help her realize she hadn't technically done anything wrong and he appreciated that what she'd done was in order to try to protect him.

The real problem with this lies with Jane, Paul's wife, and their reconciliation. The problem is, why? OK, Paul still loves her but other than that and the fact that she's Janice's mother, what reason does he really have to stay with this woman? Every confession she makes just displays how monstrously selfish she actually is. Everything she did was motivated by guilt, fear, shame, and self-interest. She never thought once about what was best for Paul, Janice, or even the baby. Hell, the only person she seemed to think about at any time during the story besides herself was the fucking suicidal asshole she fucked!

So in the end we've got a wreck of a marriage that Paul decides to keep together... just because. Jane "atones" by getting a tattoo out of a feeling of shame which he never asked her to get, trying to fuck him more, and... what, attempting to divorce him first before talking to him? She couldn't even do right by her children. And why did she say she put the baby up for adoption when all she really did was dump him on her one-night-stand's doorstep? I could see where Paul was concerned leaving the spawn with a suicidal, wife-fucking jackass, and that Jane's behavior towards it would affect his daughter's mindset, but to accept it as his and agree to raise him? Put the kid up for adoption for real, for Christ's sake! You honestly think Jane is a good candidate to raise the bastard the way she is right now? Also, it galls me that she named the bastard after her husband. She had to know right after the birth that it wasn't his kid, yet she goes ahead and names him Paul Jr.

So, yeah, in the end I didn't agree with the way this story went. Jane's a psychotic narcissist and candidate for one of the worst mothers of the year. There was no real reason to accept her back. Everything Paul did centered around making Janice feel better but how's he going to feel in three or four years when she goes off to college and he's alone in a house with his self-involved wife and her bastard, the constant nagging reminder of her faithlessness? Not enough time and effort was made to show the readers why their marriage worked or why it was even worth saving. Not a good ending.

Like a REAL man.

I liked it. There is reality in that story. He saw what had to be done for the good of his family and he did it. I wouldn't wish that on anyone, but I believe he had a better wife as a result.

He was man enough to forgive. Some readers will never understand that.

In the words of the late Robin Williams, "Well you fucked up on that one. Hung there at the edge and then you just went right over."

As a retired Major who believes I am an honorable man with integrity, me and this asshat are 2 different Majors. Maybe it's the age difference or different wars but we are polar opposites.

Pretentious virtuism. You must hate the armed forces. Is that why you emasculated ,cuckolded and let him live happily ever after raising the child of the man she cuckolded him with?

Sophistry indeed,certainly not sophistication.

Of the comments I have read (mostly negative) you have all missed the point. Love is the main point, without it Paul would not have done anything with Jane or Janice. And because of that love could see the necessity of having Paul Jr accepted into the family for the healing of Jane and Janice. Paul will accept Paul Jr as his own not only because he carries his name but because of the love he has for his wife and daughter.

The character Paul came off as quite the martinet. When he got home and discovered that his wife had had another man’s baby, he defaced the walls in his house and went back to Europe, abandoning his wife AND DAUGHTER!! What a fucking coward. Yeah, he could command troops, send young men into battle, possibly to be killed, but he couldn’t face his own wife’s failure. And to make matters worse, he decided to make his young daughter shoulder some of the blame. Jeez, what a turd. Just based on the “Paul” character, a line officer with such little respect for his own child, I could never give this story more than one star.

You lost this story completely. This is.not real life. You take a child that will forever remind you of your wife's cheating. A child that will resemble his mousey, little father? No man would do that, or even keep the wife after the cheating. She is beneath contempt.

What the fuck with the dad that his show of affection is a handshake with a 13 year old daughter. Then when he finds out that she may know he doesn't even do that, and just walks past her. Later he marks all over the house with the "stigmata" of the birth of Paul Jr. including the bedroom door of the daughter. And then leaves (abandons) the daughter without speaking to her and cowardly just goes of to Germany without discussing what the fuck happened.

The mother we already know what she did to Janice with the conspiracy and making her a part of the conspiracy. But at least the shittiness of what the mother did came out of her trying to keep the family together, being between a rock and a hard place. Not excusing it at all, but his shittiness was deliberate and utterly cold.

She is going to grow up to be one cold detached human being causing lots of heartache to herself and the men she comes into contact with.

Yeah, the weakest writers use the Lobotomy RAAC trope, where issues aren't actually solved in a sane manner, but instead characters get personality transplants that would usually be the result of someone taking a drill bit to their temples. The characters interaction reveals that the characters reconciled because the memories and the emotional impact of the events were quite simply scooped out of their skulls.

This is a tough story in that the wife did have sex with another man, got pregnant, and although not well spelled out, he fathered the child. The husband comes back and has to deal with the results.

This is really not a wimp story but a difficult issue that, with another child, being in the military and actually really loving his wife who did a one-time transgression, it is well written and a reasonable ending happened. Keep writing!

T.T.

The story is an incoherent mess. Regardless of whether you agree with what the main character did, I can't conceive of someone who could behave as he did both in Chapter 1 and 3, without some pretty major life incident rewriting his entire personality.

This is a perfectly well-written story of betrayal and redemption - but the comments are truly a revelation.

The hero is fighting the Taliban in Afghanistan (where woman are regularly beaten and branded and stoned to death for any lapse in morality) and here we have Western men demanding that Western woman suffer the same fate. Perhaps they should tell their political leaders to stop fighting the Taliban and begin to use them as examples of how Western men should behave.

LA

She lied through her teeth when she said that she 'didn't remember the sex'. She stayed with the guy for who knows how long... holding him close while being repeatedly fucked and filled with his cum. .... And then to silence her then 13 yr. old daughter by bringing her into that conspiracy shit?

The bitch should have been beaten and BRANDED with a hot iron.

Also, why'd the author have the Major wimp out on his very good plan to very slowly garrotte the motherfucker who knew who's wife he was fucking.

A potentially good story that had too many weak points so I give it only 3 stars.

The writing a little stilted and lacks expression of deep emotions but very nice try at a reconciliation story, which are always difficult.

This story reads even better the second time through. The main character shows a the circumspection and understanding that override his need for revenge. You did a great job characterizing his transformation from angry, hurt, cheated spouse to the leader of his family. This was worth reading twice, and I may return to it again.

Acts that totally destroy one's faith in your spouse and marrage are not a plausible basis for reconciliation. This series has nothing to recommend it. 1*

Also, I'm not adverse to reconciliation stories as so many others seem to be.

An unbelievable piece of garbage.

Not believable at any level.1*

All you armchair anonys aren't a pimple on real grunt's sac. You want to deal with it some other way, write your own story. Yes the biotch deserved worse, yes I probably would have beaten the crap out of the weasel but this is allegedly his life, not ours.

All you all are pretty trashy if you'd criticize a dude for protecting a little kid from having to pay for something he didn't do. (I would raise the kid either, but at least I recognize more magnanimous actions when I see them,) Some of you are Graceless Gutless HONORLESS males. Not MEN OldBearSwitch.

another cocksucking fag posting dumb cuck SHIT.

Seems, that's all of your stories,gotta be a queer or woman

are you a fucking moron, real life my ass. Maybe it the UK. In America....divorce would be on the horizon. He would also try and for give his daughter. She lost points with dad by lying to him

Nuff said.

Things like this happen all the time, whether your in the military or not. No one likes infidelity whether it is done by the male or female, but reality with one time affairs more marriages come back together, usually weak at the start but stronger after time. This story represents the real world of relationships.

I can think of numerous ways for the wife to have helped the supposedly suicidal lover out without having sex with him. Difficulty believing anyone could be that stupid.

She must have had some emotional bond with him to willingly give in so easily to that seduction technique.

For those who say it was one mistake-improperly subtracting a check in the checkbook is a mistake.

Committing adultery is a choice. A thought out decision. Perhaps a bad choice, a terrible decision and a much regretted one.

If husband had been absent for a year and one night feeling lonely and depressed went out with friends too much to drink run into old flame-that scenario might be worked through. If she confessed. But she hid pregnancy and birth.

More to the point he was not awsy from her thst long and she had plenty of time to confess.

Sorry! I am not some wild eyed BTB person but what she did is so far past one little oh excuse me mistake.

Anyone who wants to give spouse another chance that is up to them. More power to them

BUT FOR RAMONBROOK AND HIS KIND TO SAY THIS WAS JUST A MISTAKE IS LUDICROUS.

NOT TO MENTION HOW MANY OF THEIR FRIENDS AND FAMILIES KNEW OF THIS LITTLE MISTAKE AND CONSPIRED TO KEEP HIM IN THE DARK. ANYONE WHO SAW THE BABY!ALL THOSE WHO KNEW SHE HAD A BSBY THST JUST DISAPPEARED. EVERYONE AT HER WORKPLACE

Seems the little mistake just gets bigger with each passing thought.

Just how insidious does a betrayal and concerted deception have to be before you look at the actions as more than one little mistake?

This story really hit home with me, being a retired soldier. As you might of guessed it happened to me. I was on a 15 month deployment, when an old buddy called and congratulated me on my new son! To say I was shocked was an understatement! I immediately took emergency leave and flew home unanounced. When I walked in the front door my older kids raced to me happy that I was home. My wife sat there dumbfounded feeding her new baby! She started shaking and crying, it was my oldest daughter came and stood by me, my son was too young to understand. But in his haste to let everyone know I was home, called his aunt, I can picture the "oh shit" look on her face right through the phone! She was there in less than 30 minutes! My wife's sister took all the kids so we could talk, and boy did we! I found out it was a one time thing, fueled by depression and alcohol. It took quite a while but we made it through the ordeal. I took terminal leave and retired. I took a job on the other side of the country, moved my family there with me. I gave my wife one option, get the asshole to give up custody of the child, or she could stay there with him! He was all to willing to get rid of his responsibility! When my wife came to join us 3 days later, I knocked her up as fast as I could! I now have 4 children, 2 of each! Just to find out how sorry my wife was about the whole thing, I had one more demand of her, a get out of jail free card for later use. I thought about using it on her sister, but she's married. So there it is, some would say I'm a wimp, or a cuckold. But I'm neither, I'm just a soldier who fought and won 2 wars. You see, all one has in life is honor, mine is intact, and I'm happy with what I have! By the way, my oldest daughter is still giving my wife hell over it, and it's been 5 years! She loves her daddy!!

Just another American dysfunctional family. Hurrah! Too many treacheries for that marriage to survive in real life and be able to function as a family ever after. In fantasy land; sure, anything is possible there. A tattoo in the back of her neck where she won't be able to see it (like the adulterers' A of the middle age's), won't erase her treachery to her husband, her carelessness involving her daughter in the consequences of her infidelity, and will do nothing to rebuild the lost trust. Now, on top of that he even accepts the living proof of her treachery and will bring him up as the loving son he could have fathered himself, but his wife did it with another man. Like I said, I won't buy it. Interesting story anyway.

Although I think it should have been both Jane and Paul should have visited Mr Cramer. Paul should have berated him for seducing another mans wife and put the fear into him without anything physical!

For all the BTB folks ..... I hope you never make one mistake in your marriage and lose the one you love because of pride!

a CUCK/WIMP/SLIMY "LOSER" / PIECE OF "SHIT" ..... just like CUCKY BOY / LIMP DICK sophist801!

ANY OTHER QUESTIONS ........ WHORE WIFE APOLOGIST LOSERS???????

alone as he is. No friends no love no family, Just him and his basement and his little cock!!

Divorce her cheating ass on the grounds of adultery, then disinherit the little bitch of a daughter and tell her that she is now dead to you.

Tell her that she is as much a bastard as her bastard brother.

Also take the cunt of a wife to a tattooist and get the word WHORE in six inch high letters stamped on her worthless hide front and back.

First chapter was a good start but went downhill from there. Mercy fuck my ass it was all about her. This taught the daughter how to lie to her dad and future spouse. Fucked up situation but I don't know of a single returning vet who would knowingly raise another man's child. This is a bullshit story not even close to reality.

Wulf_man 1962

I feel that this is a well developed story. Unlike the btb crowd who want every woman to exist in a burning hell. Paul faces his responsibilities to family even if there is an extra one. Requiring his wife to face her actions and claim the child from the sperm donator to rebuild the family unit to fully functional.

Liked the beginning, not sure about the conclusion.

Have a CONUS-based lawyer file to have the birth certificate corrected as to male parent, change the child's name and send Jane packing. Keep Janice and let Jane live with the little bastard and his biological father. Leave an infant with a single male with alleged mental issues? WTF? Stan and Jane deserve each other. Nice story well written that turned to crap.

TWO fucking woman together with holding the truth. Dump the cheating skank wife and let the daughter live with her shame......

I read other comments. I was surprised at one showing so much sympathy to the wife

She intentionally cheated on her husband and her family. While not on birth control and not requiring her lover to use even a condom?

No, she intentionally threw her family away. Even worse having a child help cover it up. The kid will be in therapy forever.

Perhaps the wife just had buyers remorse after she did this to her family? Is she remorseful for doing such evil acts? Maybe, maybe not. The story leads you to think so but then maybe?

To forgive this level of intense betrayal, and overlook thee cold hearted callous nature of her actions/thinking shows this guy is a saint.

Started off somewhat interestingly but went downhill in Ch 2. Chapter 3 was pretty much unreadable. The story line is headshakingly poor.

ok this just stupid for 1 you can't get the son back he was with he's real father un the state's and you in germany you would have to prove that he suffers from depressed and is possibly suicidal fiirst there would be an investigation 2 even if he's depressed and is possibly suicidal what you can't proof the real father would say the kid can not leave the states the kid can't come to germany even if the mother is in germany this would be settled in court what will last a year or 2 this story is stupid and doesnt make any sence sorry for the bad english

when to use, "I" and when to use, "me." You keep screwing it up. First say the sentence without the proper nouns.

( I now had a son to raise and I wanted to make sure he loved and respected I above all things.) See, it doesn't sound right. It's, (he loved and respected, "me," above all things. (Now you can add in the others without changing the personal pronoun.

I also felt the story lacked human emotion. Also, everyone is right, the guy's a real wimp. Sorry, between the technical mistakes and the content, I couldn't rate this very high.

The wimp threw a tantrum, and ran away while refusing to face his problem, then when petitioned for divorce, he refused to sign citing the BS excuse of "seeking to understand". He conveniently forgot that his running away prevented any understanding to effect.

His running was the catalyst for his daughter's mental anguish and he blamed it on the wife for letting the girl try to solve their marriage difficulty. What a total wimp. The girl is the only adult in the story.

Now in this chapter, he "tries to take control" to make himself look less of a wimp. He insists that the wife takes back the baby claiming that it's now his responsibility, but never once did he claim it as his son. He is going to be "honorable" raising the the baby as "his daughter's half brother". What bullshit. He should either shit or get of the pot already. Either the child is son or it's not and he has no business demanding anything be done about the child. What a total loser.

Why can some people be so bold as to hide from their own comments and their refusal to attach themselves to their own comments. Opinions can be very situational and subjective. Anyone can make a mistake, some bigger than others. Paying someone to seduce another's wife seems totally ludicrous. In fantasy, it works well. However, in reality it is far different. If my wife could be seduced, I wouldn't want to be in a committed relationship with her let alone a marriage. I am not a prude but very traditional in my thinking about marriage and relationships. I have experienced people in varying degrees of mental health having been in a public service environment in the executive level. My formulation of opinions on such matters is from an informed perspective. My opinions are my opinions and I have no problem associating myself wth them because I have a comfort in knowing my intentions are good about myself and life in general. Life is what you make it and your selfconcept is how you endeavour your next step. You must not only evaluate for yourself by also how that impacts those you love and care deeply about firstly and then how that impacts others. Competitors and those withheld agendas hidden or otherwise will always be about but you cannot account for their being without making changes to yourself. Usually, that is the goal of certain people in trying to upset you and get your attention while they enjoy their own ego trip in doing so. So, yes I am what I am and I will do what has to be done to have the best life I can have. I will react to protect my family especially if any are sick weak or under attack in anyway shape or form. When love is at the precipice of a situation then love is the rule in guidance toward resolution. Although, I firmly believe in eye for an eye, there are priorities that preclude that luxury, which I've learned as a man that headed and raised a family. Your role as a leader in a family takes more things into consideration as you endeavour to make informed decisions. Sometimes revenge is an unaffordable luxury that bad people count on. This story is complex and the answers and judgment you make as a reader comes as easy as your position in life affords.

Something everyone here, especially the author, seems to forget is the mind of a frontline military officer is not like that of a civilian.

As an officer, he is very goal oriented, very political and very, very vindictive. if he was going to punish his family he would have done things much differently.

A Gunny I know here in Tokyo came home, found his Japanese wife in bed with a Japanese man, he tossed the man through a glass window and onto the street which was 3 floors down. The poor sap survived and on the day he left the hospital Gunny was there to put him back into the hospital. He of course beat the crap out of his wife, during this whole episode he never hurt his kids (aged 13, 16 and 20) but made it very clear that they were complicit for not sharing this information with him.

Now, let's compare this to a Bird Colonel who, found out his Filipina wife was cheating, he set her up to be arrested by the Japanese police for selling stimulant drugs and prostitution and then divorced her.

BTW if you are arrested by the Japanese Police for drugs very bad things happen to you, if you are a woman arrested by Popo for drugs and prostitution very, very, very bad things happen to you.

So, as you can see the Major in this story would have done something to mindfuck with his wife (the enemy) and then kept her around as a second class citizen.

I was hoping you would be able to salvage this story after the failure of chapter 2, my hopes were obviously dashed.

Hey anonymous 7/5/13, the 2 so called adults and the daughter should die from the speeding train, taking themselves out of the gene pool. The baby will be the lone survivor and will grow up rich and powerful but will despise the dead family for leaving him alone in the world. Darwin is right once again.

A bunch of greedy bastards nearly destroyed the global economy. Pouring carbon into the atmosphere has led to possibly permanent aberrations in weather patterns which kill many people from flooding, heat and violent storms. But that stuff is practically benign compared to the horror of an adult who posts a story for which he charges nothing and in which the main character refuses to react in a way that will cause considerable collateral damage to his daughter, himself and his wife's son, who played no part in his own conception or birth. Yes, for this offense the author alone deserves to stand in front of a speeding train to instantly end his life, despite the damage to his family. Society cannot stand against the damage done by an author writing a story now and then that you don't like, anonymous. Please stay anonymous. It would make me permanently nauseous if I were to discover I knew you.

I hope I meet your wife, I'll pay someone to seduce her then hopefully figure out a way to get her pregnant and I wish I could watch while you reconcile with her

Come on at least you could have had more sex put into it.. We as readers are here to read erotic stories... Add a final story with more sex or delete this non sexual crapy story

Author needs to stand in front of a speeding freight train for daring to write and post such a piece of unmitigated trash.

The wrap up was hand wringing quick. You made the point that it might be difficult for her to get Paul Jr back. So, what happened. I'm left to believe that she knocked on his door, told him she wanted the baby, he gave him it her and she flew back to her family. She is obviously a weak individual and might be influenced to stray one more time to complete her mission.

This story had possibilities but this last chapter didn't do it justice.

Thanks for your effort.

This story could've gone either way. It is heartening to see love prevail; it would've been even better if Jane had remained faithful. Her seduction was apparently premeditated and calculated. She was as much a victim as anyone but still guilty of betrayal to herself, her marriage her children and her husband. The story opened up the anatomy of a marriage on the rocks with all affected parties input. The author gave us clear evidence of what was happening so the reader was well informed to establish an opinion of their own. In some cases, I prefer reconciliation if possible. Trust being reestablished is the most significant hurdle in resuming any degree of normalcy. Counseling is always a resource to consider even seriously. I found a degree of emotion muted and the scene to scene movement was not synchronized.

Jane is too stupid to be believed. She leaves a newborn baby with a suicidal single guy??? She gets her 13 year old daughter involved in her stupity? Can there really be people out there like that? I would not want a Major with this guys reasoning capabilities leading me into combat.

I'm okay with this attempt at reconciliation for several reasons: 1) Her secondary perfidy was, although stupid, intended in part to protect him from pain; 2) He has taken a clear leadership position in the family structure; 3) He has turned the focus of this family to right and wrong. They may make it, and they may all thrive individually and as a family unit. Thanks for writing a story filled with lessons for all of us.

"I wanted to make sure he loved and respected Jane, Janice and I above all things."

Would you say "He respected I"? I hope not!!!!

It should be: "I wanted to make sure he loved and respected Jane, Janice and me above all things."

Another whore bitch wife can't keep her pants on and the wimp takes her back. What a load of crap

She cheated on her husband, because she really didn't care that much about him - or she wouldn't have done it! Then, when she found out that she was pregnant and she didn't know who the father was, she should have had an ABORTION! (there was no talk of religious conviction concerning abortion) Then, she has the baby that isn't his and has the nerve to name it after him! Then she gives it up for adoption! What kind of disjointed plot line is this? The writing is actually very good, just work on the wacky plots!

There are those who would never allow the wife to return. That is too bad and their loss.

For those who know the pain of betrayal, there is a love that transcends the pit of despair. Sometimes it is found in the arms of another that has the ability and stability to rebuild out of devastation. Sometimes it is found in the arms of the very person who brought the devastation.

It is a matter of worth. The attitude of the betrayer is the key. In this story, it is clear that the wife and daughter's concern for the welfare of the husband in combat was primary.

What should have taken place was the day after the husband returned, the wife and daughter sit him down and confess - confess it all. THEN he has options and choices he can make. They failed. The author chose to allow reconciliation. Good. However, a follow up story would have to deal with the under - cause of why the husband and wife/daughter have a basic lack of honesty and trust with each other in the home.

What shit!

1 star for not leaving a cuck alert. What a wimp! He is an insult to military men. Nonsense.

I don't know if I would have ended this tale this way. There were many ways you could have taken this, as you stated in your closing.

Real life?

Real or not it was well written and quite compelling.

This story was total fucking trash. Being ex-military I would have kicked the skanky whore slut out the door. As for the daughter she was the ring leader af the big lie. Out the door with her whore mother.

If a series of a a story is any good. If the scores start to drop as the chapters progress it is a great indication that you are losing you're audience an they don't like where you are taking a story, this series is a prime example of this. It started off strong but really fell away from there to the point were the author completely removed the husbands testicles in the last chapter

Firstly, it's secret, not secrete. Other than that, very well written; with the understandable error of not knowing it is unlawful to bring suit of any kind against an American fighting soldier (Airman, Marine, or Squids also) who are outside the continental United States by anyone within the continental United States. They are protected by the provisions of the Soldier's and Sailor's Civil Relief Act. Not that big a deal except to an ex-military man who was married to a fool who tried to sue for divorce while I was in Germany my own self some time ago.

I can handle reconciliation after a single instance of cheating, etc. But, this betrayal by the wife was mult-faceted and went beyond the one-time fuck. I followed the hubby's intellectual handling of everything-but his reason for recommitment eludes me. Many of my questions remain unanswered. This final chapter fell off for me-it seems the author just wanted to get this reconciliation over with. If this is based on a true story, as the author stated, then I'm guessing he found the hubby's decision as confounding as I did, and so could not get himself or the reader to 'buy' the hubby's decision to reconcile.

Good effort on a difficult, but compelling, story outline.

I see the author hasn't submitted anything in a while. I hope he starts again. This was for the most part well-written (if poorly edited), and also an ambitious story to attempt.

a happily married wife with a daughter at home, fucks a loser because he is depressed... yeah, right. She gets prego, doesn't abort, instead has child, knowing, get this knowing 100% that husband would eventually find out. Seriously, hundreds of people where NEVER going to ask about the boy? get real, authors insult the reader and themselves when they are too lazy to invest time into the story plot.

I understand the story and the for the most part wimps to not make it in the combat arms of the military; staff ass kissers mostly...

The one thing I have to wonder is how will this man feel after a few years with living proof of what went on, and how will he begin to react to his wife and that her son.

I do not know if I would have the strength of character to do this. Had she been forced, raped that would not be a problem, but the fact of how it happened and the subsequent coverup is a bit hard to stomach

This has to be one of the best fiction stories in the world, A man rasies he wife 's lovers baby, knowingly.........