All Comments on 'Depraved Deal - Breaking the Rules'

I said 'non erotica'

cant wait for more

keep writing

Both are doing what so many mothers and sons want.

Otherwise it's hot I love the blow job action and it's my fantasy so thumbs up five star's

Dear Mr. Nonesense, I'm so glad I got to read your story. The introduction was fantastic and plot was so deep and amazing, and the build up, oh man don't get me started!! Your character description was beyond belief.

In case you can't tell, I'm being sarcastic. You stink! You are a senile bucktoothed old mummy with bony girl arms and you smell like an elephant's butt! You should never, ever, ever, ever, ever submit a story again. Ever!

Looking forward to part 3

Glad to hear it, but it will probably be a while. I'm working on some other stories at the moment, and intend to combine and edit the first two parts of this story to improve its quality, after which I'll write and release a sequel.