All Comments on 'Depravity Pt. 03'

Where the documented the bruising and called the police. Guess who went to prison and who went home with a wad of cash after the trial? Dumb.

This is fiction, but it seems some people don't understand that. If we analyzed every story published here we'd have an endless queue of legal conflicts: devorce him or her, kill the bitch, sue them or shoot them. You have to suspend your sense of reality, if you don't you never have a story. I can find holes in Shakespeare, Tolkien, Somerset Maugham, etc. And I'm not comparing this to them, but read it as it's meant...fiction.

As for the story: I think its building up nicely, Michael obviously has an agenda: is he trying to control everyone? Wreak the marriage? I for one am eager to find out.

My only complaint is that each part is a little short, but that's minor. I really wanted to see what happened with Louise though, but I suppose I can wait.

Five stars, and ignore the anony trolls, you'll get them no matter what you write

Thank you for sharing your imagination and talent as a writer. I am enjoying this story immensely! I love the power of Michael and how he hates to lose and can see a divide and conquer mentality with how he is manipulating Louise and Steve.

I am hoping Louise does not cave and tries to outsmart Michael, maybe purchasing a jammer bracelet which interferes with the cameras installed in their house so he doesn't get to see her which would just cause him to get more driven when he figures out what the "technical" difficulties are and decides she needs to be crushed.

Wow! You amped up the story line. Now, Michael will turn Louise into a depraved woman!