All Comments on 'Descent into Depravity'

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ghalbertmckghalbertmckabout 3 years ago

A lovely opening chapter.

I'm looking forward to the following installments

AnonymousAnonymousover 3 years ago

I love the concept of a woman awakening to her sexuality through masturbation and fantasy. The way you have presented Alice is very arousing. I have to admit I was touching myself the whole way through. Well the rest of the series is waiting for me. The next time she orgasms I will too.

AnonymousAnonymousalmost 6 years ago
Very nice

That made my pussy sooooo wet,thank you!

roveroneroveroneover 6 years ago
really liked it, and her!

glad there's 3 more chapters, and really going to enjoy checking out your other stories!

5 + fave story, author

Biker_TypeBiker_Typeover 6 years ago

Great story and great writing, hope there's more to come.

maddictmaddictover 6 years ago
Wow

Sorry for your loss you Naughty girl, your way beyond IHOP now ! You should look up and see who heard you, and watched. Should you need a handyman I offer my services

KlitomaticKlitomaticover 6 years ago
Good Writing

Liked the realness of it. More please.

jen739jen739over 6 years ago

Absolutely loved it. Can completely see her in her trainers after a run, naked otherwise. I can’t wait to see where you take her, or where she takes you.

AnonymousAnonymousover 6 years ago
So fucking hot

Fab absolutely fucking fab, would love to lick up her squirt, then tounge fuck her to heaven. Cunt lapping sex maniac Lanc's UK322

legsfeettoeslegsfeettoesover 6 years ago
So Fucking Hot

I absolutely loved it! Well written and very erotic. I gave it 5 stars because I couldn't give it more! And I was so delighted when you correctly called it a "chaise longue" rather that the usual and incorrect "chaise lounge". The device is a long chair, and the correct French for that is "chaise" the French word for chair and "longue" the French feminine form of the word (to agree with chaise, which is a feminine noun in French) that means long! "Chaise lounge" means nothing in reference to the device in French. It's just wrong. Kudos on the correct name and spelling!

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