All Comments on 'The Guy Who Came in From the Cold Ch. 01'

I can't wait for the next chapter.

more. and in his mouth please

I think you rushed this a little. You could accentuate more Rory's shame and humiliation at being topped by a work-mate - an a subordinate at that. I mean, you told us who they are, but I don't know how Rory feels.

Because I'm fundamentally NOT gay, my favorite gay porn focuses on the supposed shame and disgrace that are threatened if I suck somebody's cock. Maybe Dewayne could taunt Rory more, threaten to involve another co-worker - ad then follow through.

The few stories I've posted are full of humiliation and degradation.

DonaldElliott11

Thanks to readers who posted comments about my first chapter. This is my first venture into writing erotica so I can understand how the story may feel a little bumpy. I really appreciate the feedback and will take it into consideration in the chapters to come.

Good evening. Thanks to readers for the comments. I will be continuing the story under a new title "(The) Guy Who Came in From the Cold" to better reflect the genre.