All Comments on 'Desiderio'

by CynOfTheCentury

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smiling_readersmiling_readerabout 13 years ago
interesting start..

I'd love to read more...hopefully where Alessandra grows to love her husband :)

michelleloves23michelleloves23about 13 years ago

I love this story, please write more of this story :)

CynOfTheCenturyCynOfTheCenturyabout 13 years agoAuthor
thanks!

I really appreciate the initial feedback! I'm going to try and make this a monthly thing and just see where this goes!

AnonymousAnonymousalmost 13 years ago
Very Nice!

Very interesting start! Very addicting!

EMiamiRiverRatEMiamiRiverRatabout 12 years ago
Captivating

Tho' you may have provided much more of a lead-in to this story, I feel you chose just the right place to begin. In a 'take no prisoners' style, you managed to present a story that stands on its own in an all-to-short time (leave the readers wanting). Should you decide to go further with the heroine and the antagonist, you have set the stage for both a prequel and one or more sequels. Write where the heart leads!

AnonymousAnonymousover 9 years ago
Where did you go?

Loved this story! I was so disappointed that you had not written more. :( This has such great possibilities!

AnonymousAnonymousabout 9 years ago
Wow!

Rip my heart out!

Very well written.

I'd love to have more of this story.

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