All Comments on 'Desire Fulfilled Ch. 02'

I loved your story and was surprised that I was the first to comment on this chapter. After I absorbed the first chapter I was hooked all the way. With the overflow of joy in each other, I predict that the human race is in trouble unless you develop this story even further. Please don't stop!

No need to add anything else !!!

I love Miss Janes work. Very nice and creative. Had me hooked on first chapter and so glad to see a second.

Continues to be just 'ass' sensuous 'ass' ever!! Great work again Miss Jane!! Lusciously erotic gal/gal encounters...

Mabel

Another arousing chapter from a girl who knows what sensual writing is.

Keep 'em coming - if you know what I mean!

Just awesome. You write so well and your work is so hot! Paul

I would give anything to be one of those beautiful, sensuous women...indulging on the other......aaahhh

it could be called, "Cherry smoothies with a hint of bum" ;)