All Comments on 'Desiree'

This cry's out for a sequel

Strange story. I normally don't go for this type of material, but I found this one interesting. The author set the mood. Desi is depressed. Desi is trapped in a life style of dullness and lacking joy and excitement. her new "Masters" break her out of this funk that she is in.

I asked to have this one removed so I can resubmit and edited version. Fewer mistakes and a better flow. I am working on a sequel.