All Comments on 'Desiree's Star Ch. 10'

Man, took a long time to get here, gotta say i'm upset that it took this long, but it was worth it

I can't wait for the next one!

I love the that you wright this story, and I hope to read more.

Keep writing and finish!!

is wrong with people in these stories. Gabe acts like a young teenager, I gather he's Scott's age, you'd think at 26 he'd act like more of an adult. Her mom and brother know what's going on but haven't told her? That's some family loyalty going on there. These people are all acting like they are in high school, giggling, passing notes, getting in fights, time to grow up. Fairly well written but poorly developed characters.

Don't thin this explanation adds p - like fair enough it adds drama, but I don't think the actions fit the 'solution'