All Comments on 'Desire's Fear'

by elizaloo

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MaydaypilotMaydaypilotalmost 2 years ago

My poem sketched a scene that comes to erotic life in your voice. A satisfying treat for any author.

AnonymousAnonymousalmost 2 years ago

A good poem for sure! I think the pacing of the reading could be improved.

AnonymousAnonymousalmost 2 years ago

Hot! Thanks

bestkeptsecret678bestkeptsecret678over 1 year ago

Very nice. Creating such an erotic rendition of another's poetry work would seem to me a challenge, which you accomplished. Excellent.

GallantWriterGallantWriter4 months ago

That voice of yours is electrifying. Could definitely listen to it for a good long while.

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I started writing and submitting to Lit in 2006... there have been a few dry years! Happy to be back at writing and submitting stories, poems, along with some audios. NoTalentHack wrote an amazing (as always) short piece that was submitted to Letters, and very kindly aske...