All Comments on 'Desires within Young Girls Ch. 13'

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KitsunaeKitsunaeabout 10 years ago
Longer

your doing really good and all but if i didnt have tons of other stories to read i would forget u because you take forever to submit and when you do its not even 2 pages long...

AnonymousAnonymousover 9 years ago
sorry but i agree, please longer chapters.........its so well done,

5 stars & then some !

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