All Comments on 'Desperate and Gorgeous Bk. 01 Ch. 01'

Ever thought having the guy NOT think with his dick?

Good first chapter.

Wow! This is gonna be fun to read!

A great story with excellent writing and a long intricate opening with lots of money transactions and a conclusion that was not in Leah's favor. Their union was preordained and was very well described. Mat may be sexually satisfied but his problems are just beginning. The solution may be in the car that was chasing them.

Great start, can't wait for more. Five stars.

Extremely well written. The two entrances were well-described, as were the characters. The request, the transfer of monies, and the phone calls were detailed and provided the reader with some necessary background. The union at the second meeting was expected, and the scene description was perfect. The plot is different from many others and drew me in quickly. The problems now begin.

3*+

But 'Matt' is too stupid for words, making promises before he has all the facts.