All Comments on 'Desperate and Gorgeous Bk. 01 Ch. 05'

A tragic but not unexpected ending. This chapter was as convoluted as possible and only makes sense from the author's perspective. I can understand Leah's position. What a way to live. The story is finished but they still have to live and Matt will someday reach Los Angeles—an incredibly good story with excellent writing, and the kind of detail expected on this site. I'm sorry it's over, but an author can only carry a story so far. Well Done.

I knew that was coming - but still don't like it. lol Great story! 5 Stars.

Phew! That is a real thriller (with erotic love interest); fast paced, tense and breathtaking. Great story. Looking forward to Book 2.

Very well written, good plot line and plausible. When’s the next Book out?

As much as I shy away from murder, mayhem & "man's inhumanity to man," you've carried me through this story. I look forward to being carried on into Book 02. Well done on all counts, imo.