by soflabbwlvr
Hope this will be a continuing series but if not, thanks for the read.
i've read some bad ones but five pages of this crap your one of the worst but anybody who would sign their name to this can't be to bright so nothing i could say to you that someone hasn't already said and a sicko like you is already dead and just doesn't know it.
No amount of good writing can cover up this much crap.
This website is now to the point where they will allow anything to be printed. This thing is terrible, it made me feel ill.
Lets see some more, this made for good reading and as I should, I took it for what it is, a sex story.
Looks like all the anon trolls are at it again.
But the pros, like StangStar, liked your story. And I liked it. So the trolls can climb back under the rocks.
Loved it and like the series premise. I look forward to ready many more of your submissions.
The trolls,whether with a handle or without,are starting to overwhelm lit. It's a shame.
A cheating slut is a cheating slut you can wrap it up in pretty pink bows but if it smells like shit, then it is shit.
Hopefully hubby will see the video and kill her when she gets home.
Good one. Could have used a little more anguish, but plausible enough for this pervert.
good story, but the husband doesn't deserve all the effort she's putting in to save the marriage ... !
I loved this story, it's one of my favorites. However, I wish we could have a few more scenes with her and Mitchell. That scene alone was worth reading the whole story and was intensely erotic to me.
I love stories where it feels like you're watching a movie. The scenario was very realistic. Each character had their own personality which served the overall plot. I also love when good women give in to their sexual desires (for whatever reason; money, love, lust, ect...)
The writing was very good, and the dialogue was amazing. The dialogue is upper echelon on this site.
My favorite scene was when Elizabeth was asking for the pay raise, and then it lead into a discussion about sucking dick. It was done perfectly.
I look forward to reading the rest of the Desperate Measures series. I originally thought they were all made with the same characters, but I later saw that they weren't. So it'll be fun to see what other adventures are there.
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Normally don't condone cheating, but if anybody deserved it this guy did. I hate abusive husbands. Hopefully she will realize that this guy isn't worth her time and move on.
Loved the story! Great job developing the conflict. One of your best female characters in my opinion. I appreciate that you made it her choice to suggest a possible solution to her financial problems and you didn't make her boss coerce her into sex. Instead he was all business and tried to dissuade her, though he still got his blow job in the end and Liz was happy with her decision - nice balance. Also enjoyed the group dynamic voyeuristic elements of the last sex scene. Great writing and dialogue as always.
Regarding the husband: At the end he seemed like an afterthought. I imagine she would have to tell him sooner or later and she would either divorce him or he'd have to get over it and eventually request access to the filming sets...either one works.
Fun times....keep writing more stories. Blow jobs and orgasms for all!
-M
What a fun read. Thanks for the great story. I look forward to reading more of yours.
I do enjoy reading it. And I would like to thank God that I am single. I would not want to be unemployed and have a wife and kids.
to this where a MILF had to become a fluffer. After reading yours, I don't think I could write one any better than this. Thank you for the orgasm. After that audition I would hope Mr. Callahan considers adding a MILF or Cougar division. Lots of young guys, and older woman love watching Actresses like Brandi Love hook up with teens. I know I do.
personally, I think she should have gotten Mitchell the fluffer's job.
I hate cheating wife/cuckold stories. However, Mitchell was so terrible the way he treated Liz, he deserve what he gets. Against my nature, I gave this 5 stars.
typical blame the husband bullshit. Liz is a whore plan a simple. A the last comment was bullshit to. If Liz didn't like how she was being treated.....DIVORCE his ass.
She's a hot one! My Linda doesn't make any outside money that I know of in her outside activities, she just has fun but oh what she could pull down with her appetites .......