All Comments on 'Desperate to Please'

If I may suggest, this is more apt for the Fetish section than for the Gay Male one.

Admittedly, it was very well written though. Good pacing, good build up and good (literal) climax

@scargazer Thank you for reading! I'm fairly new to posting and sometimes unsure what category fits best, so I appreciate the suggestion and will try to change it. I'm glad you liked it! :)

Although maybe fetish would be better, I think this was hot as hell! I loved it!

@FreakSlave I'm so glad you enjoyed it! That makes my day. I've sent an edit request so the category will change eventually!

It's super hot. I remember I have seen a similar one where the subordinate volunteered to drink piss so the boss wouldn't humiliate himself.

Very.erotic story, surprised by the twist, didn’t see it all coming. But definitely enjoyed all the way till the end. Would like to hear part 2