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bobstalesbobstalesover 12 years ago
And morning dessert as well!

Well done! Thanks for a new classic!

nomoretears00nomoretears00over 12 years ago
*laugh*

Guess the double entendres didn't float past her like they thought! Liked the way it ended, too, that was great.

cliffgirl08cliffgirl08over 12 years ago

I'll take that dessert to go please.

LarryInSeattleLarryInSeattleover 12 years ago
Well done

I would have used "Strawberries and Cream" and "Chocolate 'Moose' " for the introduction and therafter, just Strawberries and Chocolate. Easier reading and a sexier double meaning.

NightTempestNightTempestover 12 years ago
:)

lmfao...that ending was perfect...bitch knew the whole time.

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Former SR71 pilot, currently professional writer and book editor; writes under name "habu" on other erotica sites. My erotica books can be found under the author name habu or Dirk Hessian (and coauthored books with Sabb under the names Shabbu or Stephen Kessel) at S...