All Comments on 'Destination Wedding'

How old is the mother? 52? Really?

Pretty hot story

It was a fun story. The non-linear way it was told got confusing at times, but it I got past it and enjoyed the rest. Thanks. Hope there's a part two.

Way over the top, but an absolutely fuckin' awesome story! I loved it, and I'm looking forward to more of the same.

First you write "Clay stood and stretched, pressing his hands into the small of his aching back. The loose tee-shirt he wore tightened over his middle-aged paunch. " Then you write "Julia stood in the alcove outside of Clay's cabana, wearing a string bikini about 20 years too young for his 52-year-old mother. "

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Unless she had him when she was 12 -- and even that's pushing it -- this just doesn't add up. Either that or you have a very odd definition of middle-aged.

Nice but I could have done without Clay being bi.

Enjoyed your story like others I’ve read so far. I hope this is only chapter 1 with more to come, you have left it open to move them forward.