All Comments on 'Destined Hearts Ch. 04'

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josranvictorjosranvictorover 5 years ago
What the fuck

Vanalas are we going to be moving in this shit???...Dont expect me to read this story if Praveen is going to be stupid lyk apig on heat...lyk Antonio i also hate him.YES I DO just becoz he is stupid and I CONFIRM THAT,how cud afool and adisdain lyk Antonio hurt u and humiliate u in every possible way and u still appear to his face lyk amoving fucking wind.....Stupid Him,...can he plz stop Pretending to be agud boy and he the Fuck stands out for him self????? HECK EVERY ONE'S HAPPINESS so what,i hate him even more..And for Antonio,heck i HATE HIM AND I'L NEVER LYK HIM,NEVER..i hate Him with all the blood,veins,ateries,and muscles plus that sister Andrea,i cant stand them...I hate It if we'l move in such a way of humiliations,..I mean its one sided only the fools are dominating...ENOUGH

josranvictorjosranvictorover 5 years ago
I thought...

for amoment Praveen would get out of that lengerie but He is areal fool that needs aremedy before he completely go nuts..YES,am saying this becoz if he had left the house he wouldnt have made me mad today,he'dnt have got those filthy remarks 4rm that pervert but yah afool will remain afool.....i swear no one in D.H makes things bad and dreadful lyk Praveen,instead of putting them in their place,he just cries lyk acry baby he is...he freezes,silences himself as if he is God,i hate it DAMN IT....HAD HE PUT THAT BRAT IN HIS PLACE HE WOULDNT HAVE BEEN SUCH AFREAK TO US...but yes,we support acry baby..oh you support him nt me unless he improve that stupidity to courage....God i hate these four people..Praveen as the first..Since he is the stupid guy here

josranvictorjosranvictorover 5 years ago
huh..Honey moon bla bla bla..

King van u've never made mad lyk today...Nw luk at the honey moon thing...Bruce is going!! hehe nw u'l see that fool Praveen cry and sobbing......i lyked him thinking that he'll be brave but its lyk he's afrustrator and i dont support losers....thats why iam team Adrian,Ramon,Miguel/Angello,George and AIDAN THE KING...and to make me more frustrated u're going to take 8months with out posting..Fuck

MyGirlBaeMyGirlBaeover 5 years ago
Sooooo

I'm a against violence and Shiite but can I just punch Antonio.

He is so damn irritating, childless and acts like a beat who can't seem to get their way. Than again it's a typical rich kid behaviour. What annoys me is that they keep cutting in each other sentences, don't let the other character finish saying what they want.

I'm afraid he's really going to Praveen to the point of no return.

And the guy Bruce? Really? Him? The hell.

Praveen needs to grow a backbone. He really needs it, he shouldn't let people step on him like that. And I wonder if he really is that good of an actor that nobody can see that the poor boy is freaking suffering. Like dang

Honest opinion: this is my least favourite chapter(because of how irrational Antonio made me feel) really want to see more character development in the future.

Anyway, I did really look out for this update and thank you.

Hoping to see more xoxox

AnonymousAnonymousover 5 years ago
Whyyyyyyyyyh

This is nonsense, 4 chapters and all I feel is pain. Pain for Parveen, and why is Antonio such a jerk. Why are you doing us this, why are you hurting us along with Parveen. Please, please, flip the script. Let Parveen go back without going on the honeymoon and speak the truth.

mfa607mfa607over 5 years ago

Wow! Antonio is a complete sadist! I truly hope Praveen gets the upper hand soon!! Please!

Thank you!

abhisheckabhisheckover 5 years ago
OMG

Why am I scared where this is going? praveen better tell someone. It's heartbreaking to read this. But anyway, I love him like crazy and I know Vanalas will surprise us just like he always does.

please post more.

whiteasianlvrwhiteasianlvrover 5 years ago
Getting Too Painful

I wrote the author a personal note but after reading the other comments posted here realize we're all on the same page. Frankly, the last chapter became almost too painful to read...a young, innocent guy being humiliated by his "husband" and his husband's lover as well as his sister-in-law, while the adoring mother-in-law and grandmother act totally oblivious. No one should have to endure such emotional suffering that only seems to go on and on. Given the continuing saga of suffering, it is hard to imagine how the author can flip to a positive destiny and demonstrate that Antonio is worth anything but scorn and disgust. Filthy rich kid is right as another commentator pointed out. PLEASE end the suffering of your readers or the next chapter will be my last!

AnonymousAnonymousover 5 years ago
Intriguing story.

Please let Praveen get his outside voice and Antonio get his just deserve!

AnonymousAnonymousover 5 years ago
Z

Can't help but be disgusted that you have character who allows himself to be abused instead of just tell the women the truth. He is going along with this crap and isn't thinking whay they will feel when it all comes out. The two bf's deserve one another. Ethan is very clueless and seems to think Antonio is way better than he is. I didn't get why he'd lovingly stroke his shoulder while pushing them together. Uugh

.It's tpo frustrating to read with him going along with this, that and the next thing. I hate to criticize characters people create but give this guy a freaking backbone. He should have gotten a room in a hotel & told them to have a blast. What does He think this trip will be like? He's a masochist. He doesn't need to cry and quake and be tortured even if he pretends for the wom I make 1000 dollars a month. en.

AnonymousAnonymousover 5 years ago
Loving it

Eventhough it's taking ages before you post a chapter and I have been feeling like not following this story is intriguing thanks and please pace up on submission C

AnonymousAnonymousover 5 years ago
wow

This story is amazing and I have a strong feeling that Praveen will get confident just like Adrian. do you remember him guys?

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