Destined Hearts Ch. 04

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"What are you standing there for?" He asked harshly, pulling Bruce closer. "We need to leave."

"Hmm." Bruce was already a winner because he had his man. "The boy is probably shocked."

"Shocked?" Antonio laughed manically. "Did he actually think I was gonna go on a honeymoon with him." He smirked, giving the boy an evil grin. "You wanted to go to the honeymoon right?" He chuckled. "Well, we are going for the honeymoon but not for you and me but Bruce and me so you better enjoy this journey."

Praveen was speechless. This was the height of it all and he had never thought Antonio would do that to him. He was deeply hurt.

"Let's go."

Without saying anything else, they turned and started heading for the gate arm in arm. Praveen just stood and watched as a tear started going down his cheek. Getting married to Antonio had been the greatest mistake ever.

What will Praveen do? What happens next?

***

Thank you so reading this chapter to the end and I am so sorry for the late post but I hope you enjoyed it.

Do you guys like the story so far? Do you think Praveen should tell someone about what he's going through? Do you think Antonio will ever love Praveen?

The theme songs for this chapter are, "Stone cold," by Demi Lovato, "Broken vows," by Lara Fabian, "Best thing I never had," by Beyonce and "Try everything," by Shakira.

Don't forget to drop your comments and rates about this chapter. I have already started chapter five and will post as soon as I am done. I love you guys so much.

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AnonymousAnonymousover 5 years ago
wow

This story is amazing and I have a strong feeling that Praveen will get confident just like Adrian. do you remember him guys?

AnonymousAnonymousover 5 years ago
Loving it

Eventhough it's taking ages before you post a chapter and I have been feeling like not following this story is intriguing thanks and please pace up on submission C

AnonymousAnonymousover 5 years ago
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Can't help but be disgusted that you have character who allows himself to be abused instead of just tell the women the truth. He is going along with this crap and isn't thinking whay they will feel when it all comes out. The two bf's deserve one another. Ethan is very clueless and seems to think Antonio is way better than he is. I didn't get why he'd lovingly stroke his shoulder while pushing them together. Uugh

.It's tpo frustrating to read with him going along with this, that and the next thing. I hate to criticize characters people create but give this guy a freaking backbone. He should have gotten a room in a hotel & told them to have a blast. What does He think this trip will be like? He's a masochist. He doesn't need to cry and quake and be tortured even if he pretends for the wom I make 1000 dollars a month. en.

AnonymousAnonymousover 5 years ago
Intriguing story.

Please let Praveen get his outside voice and Antonio get his just deserve!

whiteasianlvrwhiteasianlvrover 5 years ago
Getting Too Painful

I wrote the author a personal note but after reading the other comments posted here realize we're all on the same page. Frankly, the last chapter became almost too painful to read...a young, innocent guy being humiliated by his "husband" and his husband's lover as well as his sister-in-law, while the adoring mother-in-law and grandmother act totally oblivious. No one should have to endure such emotional suffering that only seems to go on and on. Given the continuing saga of suffering, it is hard to imagine how the author can flip to a positive destiny and demonstrate that Antonio is worth anything but scorn and disgust. Filthy rich kid is right as another commentator pointed out. PLEASE end the suffering of your readers or the next chapter will be my last!

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