All Comments on 'Destinee and Destiny Ch. 01.2'

Oh yeah! Getting good now! I have read the story from the start and like the premise of it. I like how you delve into the characters and the flow of the story. As you said, we all have to face ourselves sooner or later and deal with what lies underneath. Please keep writing and I look forward to reading more. Thanks for your time and imagination.

I think the current scores does not do your story justice. Should be at about 4.75 for all the parts in my opinion.

Great plot, interesting characters, good job so far.

Great work so far

The last two parts are on their way! 01.3 had been rejected so had to switch some things up and resubmit. You shouldn't have to wait much longer!