All Comments on 'Detective and the Porn Star Ch. 01'

interesting beginning with some potential -- but for those of us who like to read, PLEASE use the right word: it's "a barely THERE floral blouse".

am I being picky? probably -- but getting the grammar right makes the read more enjoyable.

Sorry about the word mixup there Anonymous, I usually try to catch those in my read through, but must have missed that one. I will be sure to fix it on my master copy so any future revisions will have the correct word.

Thanks for the comment and the kind words.

Promising start but its too soon to make much of a judgement.

My interest definitely hiked up in the last sentence at the mention of Ms Juggs.

As a confirmed titman I look forward to finding out just how "big" a star she is! :-)

WTH is "shinny"?!