All Comments on 'Detective Spring Ch. 04'

Still looking forward to more though.

I love how Alys and Arden are getting on better terms! And now Cadence and John with that make out session. It's like either C and J are mates just like A and A. (maybe)

You're going to cockblock the readers again, aren't you. With that cliffhanger I'll bet.

Please get help with punctuation - it makes it harder to read and understand what's an interesting story.